Tag: Young Adult Fiction

Reviewing Beauty’s Daughter

Title: Beauty’s Daughter: The Story of Hermione and Helen of Troy
Author: Carolyn Meyer
Published by ‎ HMH Books for Young Readers
Year: 2013
Format Read: Kindle
Pages: 353
Language: English
ASIN: B00AUZS6K6
Dates Read: 2024, March 27 to April 14

In the past, I have read In Mozart’s Shadow and Patience, Princess Catherine by Carolyn Meyer. I loved them both. I appreciated her vivid use of first person, how she incorporated many historical figures into the story, and her deep emotional characters. I wanted to read another one of her novels, but I wanted to read a story with an ancient setting. I liked Troy by Adẻle Geras when I read it in middle school, so I decided to try Beauty’s Daughter. 

Hermione is an evocative, inquisitive, and assertive protagonist. This story focuses on Hermione’s perspective before, during, and after the Trojan war. Throughout the novel, her thoughts and feelings of her mother, as well as others, change over time. The characters are used to convey plots of the war and other Ancient Greek stories (in case the reader is unfamiliar with these). Basically, many pages of the story’s first part is a summary of the Iliad and other ancient lore paraphrased from Hermione’s perspective with an emphasis on her relationships to others. I have not read all of these legends or myths, but I am familiar with the basic plot of many. Despite all of the details and references to Ancient Greek stories and characters, this book was still  an easy read, and it is just the right length.

Due to the winding plot filled with many disappointments for the characters, I thought that the novel’s ending would be bittersweet, and I was prepared for the death or disappearance of Hermione or her lover. Also, I had gotten names and prior Greek stories confused. Orestes and Pylades are characters in this book, so I thought they were going to turn into stars or constellations by the end of the story. Fortunately, they do not, but I assumed this because I confused their names with Orion and Pleiades, persons from another myth I’ve either read or heard about. Anyway, the ending was alright, a little bittersweet, but the leads got a good ending. 

There is an author’s note where Meyer explains how she uses myths combined with much of her own imagination and creativity to create this novel. I do think that this book is an easy read for 12 and up, but there is suggestive content in keeping with the spirit of the values and myths. I would recommend it if you like ancient world literature and retellings. I think that I like the other novels that I’ve read by this author better because they seem to have a better structure and more likable extra characters. 

On Abiassa’s Fire

I’m trying to find fiction to read. I’ve heard of this author before in Christian circles. When I browsed this series, the plot sounded incredible.

Title: Embers
Series: Abiassa’s Fire
Serial: Book 1
Author: Ronie Kendig
Published by Enclave Publishing
Edition Year: 2019
Format Read: Kindle
Pages: 370
Language: English
ASIN: B07P2N2YQN
Dates Read 2023, September 3 to December 30

The writing is so clear. The story reads smoothly. It reads like a movie. I can perfectly picture characters, their expressions, and movements. I thought this power or “magic system” was really cool, and it’s a gift from a being called Abiassa. Characters who can wield the flames are called Accelerants or Incipients depending on their path.The fantasy names for different characters, places, and ideas in the world are very unique and stylish. However, sometimes, the characters have a mysterious way of talking as if they are referencing events that happened in the world’s history before the novel. Sometimes, the characters talk as if they are referencing something that happened behind the scenes that is unknown to the reader. Moreover, this is probably the most that I’ve seen sentences without pronouns used consistently throughout a novel. Instead of “She mended it,” it’s “Mended it.” I guess writing like this is for the purpose of keeping the action from stifling. The author/editor may also have felt that some pronouns are unnecessary because the reader knows who the action belongs to without the use of the pronoun in the sentence. Additionally, I could grasp biblical themes and outlines of biblical characters in the story and dialogue. I could see echoes of the books by the Old Testament prophets and the Book of Revelation. It’s interesting that the protagonist is a prophesied apocalyptic figure who is hesitant and fleeing from his role. Overall, this first book was a good adventure that ends with a cliffhanger.

Title: Accelerant
Series: Abiassa’s Fire
Serial: Book 2
Author: Ronie Kendig
Published by Enclave Publishing
Edition Year: 2019
Format Read: Kindle
Pages: 472
Language: English
ASIN: B07P1J62CX
Dates Read December 30, 2023 to February 23, 2024

After the first chapter, the next several chapters were boring. Haegan is captured (again), but once he is freed, the story gets interesting again. However, he is a reluctant hero the entire novel. He is constantly doubting his identity. There is more information on the different supernatural entities or superpowers in the world. This phrasing that leaves out pronouns is continued into this novel (and the next). By this point, there are too many side characters with cool, but wild fantasy names. Fortunately, there is an index in this book and the next. Anyway, I’m glad to learn more about this world, the powers, and Abiassa.

Title: Fierian
Series: Abiassa’s Fire
Serial: Book 3
Author: Ronie Kendig
Published by Enclave Publishing
Edition Year: 2019
Format Read: Kindle
Pages: 433
Language: English
ASIN: B07P1JXS7H
Dates Read 2024, February 23 to March 26

This book is much more fast paced with more characters. Some side characters that were introduced just completely disappeared from the story. There were a few twists and surprises. Although this book in the series mostly kept my interest, I started to get tired of all the battles and strategy dialogue. I just wanted the story to finally finish and stop stalling. I liked the ending, and I believe that most of the big things in the plot did resolve by the end of the novel. Well, I thought the main villain would get a more dramatic end. Also, the final endings for a few key characters seem to be inconclusive after the final battle. I wonder what happens to them? Does the father recover? What happens to Drracien? What happens to the Prince’s other friends that traveled with him this entire time? Do they get an ending to their story?

Overall Impressions and Other Comments

I loved the story’s concept, but I felt that the execution could have been better. I loved the names and magic system. Although there was a boring part and moments that dragged, the series kept my interest. By the third book, there were too many names and side characters for my tastes. I like how the author portrayed the different romantic couples. Each pair had a unique “style” so that the couples did not seem like cookie cutter lovebirds. I liked the ending, but I wish that more information was given about other important characters.The Kindle versions that I read had quite a few typos in each of the books. I loved how the author wove biblical concepts into the story. Like the protagonist, some biblical prophets would doubt God and do their own thing. The series parallels real world questions about mysteries and scriptural truth when it comes to God’s actions in the world, free will, and spiritual empowerment. Overall, it was an enjoyable read.

A Review of Illusionarium

Title: Illusionarium
Author: Heather Dixon
Published by Greenwillow Books
Year: 2015
Format Read: Kindle
Pages: 368
Language: English
ASIN: B00M70YWS2
Dates Read March 29 to April 8 2022

This is probably my first steampunk novel. The book was mentioned on a few blogs so I decided to read it. The author has some other novels that seem exciting, so I may read those later. After reading this fantastic story, I was surprised that there were less than 100 reviews on Amazon. It was a deep and fascinating story with wonderful worldbuilding. Reading this book was almost like watching a movie- not all novels can make me feel this way. Also, I never knew what to expect next, and it was a quick read. The world is based on 19th century England with detailed steampunk elements such as airships and unique technology. I appreciated Dixon’s innovative words and concepts such as orthogonagen, polarage, fantillium, the Venen, Illusionarium. The book is in first-person, and the protagonist Jonathan Gouden narrates the story. The narrative voice is realistic; you can tell he is a teenager, very intelligent, a bit awkward, and still trying to figure out some sentiments. I enjoyed his footnotes, an extra creative touch. To me, all of the other main characters have vibrant and unique personalities as well. Some of the characters are based on real people from 19th century England. Not only does the writer build the steampunk world that I just described, but also she builds an alternative world as well which is a derelict and dysfunctional version of Jonathan’s world. This is the world that the villain who brings the Fantillum comes from, along with the Venen. That world serves as a warning, and the characters have to make moral choices. There is a lot of meaning packed into the plot of this original young adult novel. There are a few twists and not all are happy, but eventually the main heroes find the right way, and it is a good ending.

Two Fairy Tale Retellings

Title: The Fairest Beauty

Author: Melanie Dickerson

Series: Hagenheim/Fairy Tale Romance Series (3)

Published by Zondervan 

Year: 2012

Pages: 336 (Paperback)

Format Read: Kindle 

Language: English

ISBN: 978-0-310-72440-7

I wanted to read a fairy tale retelling, and I decided to try out this book. The Fairest Beauty is a retelling of the fairy tale, Snow White. This version of the classic fairy tale does not contain common elements of magic and fantasy; however, it has a Christian-biblical worldview.The setting is Bavaria during the Holy Roman Empire; the scenes are written as realistic historical fiction. There are several devout and pious Christians, especially the main character, Sophie. She prays frequently, reads scriptures, and often recalls what the priest told her in the past. Characters discuss forgiveness and redemption and ponder the will of God. The duchess is the mean queen, and although nothing fantastical happens when she talks to her mirror, generally, her every thought and her every action is eccentric and malevolent. Some themes and takeaways from this book are Sophie’s abuse and her desire to be loved and cherished, Gabe’s sibling rivalry, the downfall of evil (Psalm 10), and God’s protection. Finally, a happy ending (or beginning of the next chapter in life). It was great to read this Christian retelling of a fairytale. I did not know what to expect, but the book was fine. It was very creative how the author reworked the reality of this classic story.

Dates Read January to February 2021

Title: The Piper’s Pursuit

Author: Melanie Dickerson

Series: Hagenheim/FairyTale Romance Series(10)

Published by Thomas Nelson

Year: 2019

Pages: 321

Format Read: Kindle 

Language: English

Several fiction recommendations appeared on my Amazon account; this novel’s plot description seemed pretty interesting so I decided to read it. This is the second book by Melanie Dickerson that I have read. It’s a reimagining of The Pied Piper of Hamelin,  and it is another young adult medieval romance fairy tale with a Christian worldview. It’s around the 14th century in the Holy Roman Empire. The heroine, Katerina, is brave and strong with a disdain for arrogant men like her stepfather and the new guy in town, Steffan, who is the Duke’s “prodigal” son. They try to work together to figure out the mysteries in town: the children disappearing, the rat infestations, the beast attacks. They eventually uncover her stepfather Hennek’s wrongdoings and the story really takes off; it’s a suspenseful adventure. Steffan and Kat learn about each other and begin to trust each other and dismantle assumptions. Katerina has to be strong because her stepfather is abusive to her and her mother; she has to be the one to protect them and handle issues. Steffan felt wronged by his place in life such as being the younger son and not getting the inheritance. In the story, it’s revealed that disobeyed his father and he feels ashamed of this. The father is a Father God figure in that he forgives his son and shows him love and mercy.

Dates Read May to August 2021